In the blog, there are 10 images, and only one video, so, practically are 1,66 images per entry, and 0,16 videos per entry; i can say that this little blog is fully of images, so isn't hard to read or boring.
Now, for my next trick (jk), i will select an entry of catalina's blog and review it... - The roulette stops in: A country i would like to visit.-. Well, how the tittle says, the post is about a country that catalina would like to visit, most specifically Greece. The post have 230 words and have a variety of pictures (4) to lighten the text. I choose this entry mostly because the desire of travel, i think, cannot lie and is respectable, also is hard to speak about a place that you dont know.
The text is the next:
Hi Fau Bloggers!
Today I will talk about a beautiful country I would like to visit, Greece.
Greece is a very good place to travel because get together history, beautiful landscapes, architecture, art and entertainment in one place.
This is a mediterranean country in Europe, has a long coastline because it made up of seven archipelagos with 1400 islands. Her geography is mountainous and with a variety of nature.
Greece is the birthplace of western culture because was a big and developed civilization. Here was born many schools of sciences, phylosophy and art very important to history world and nowadays.
Greece offer a variety types of trips. If you want to do a history and architecture trip, you can go to Athens, the culture centre of Greece. In this city you can visit the Parthenon, Theatre of Herodes, Acropolis, Temple of Hephaestus, Temple of Olympian Zeus, Ancient Agora of Atehns and others archaeological museums.
Also, you can do a nature tours around the Greek Islands. In the islands there are many amazing beaches! Some are very quite and others are more popular and luxury but all have really beautiful colors of sand and crystalline or deep blue waters.
In conclusion, Greece is an incredible country, full of important place to human history but also is a good place to relax and enjoy of the sea, architecture, nature and her colours.
This post is almost free of errors, almost. I found errors in:
.- Some are very quite (WW) and others are more popular and luxury I think that the word is Quiet but Catalina wrote it bad
.-"full of important place(SM) to human history". She forgot the S on Places. of that, is a very nice text, with a strong desire that i support.
.-"Also, you can do a(NN) nature tours around the Greek Islands"
.-"also is a good place to relax and enjoy of the sea, architecture, nature and her(WW) colours." You use "it" to refer to a nature charasteristic.
.-" Her(WW) geography is mountainous" Again, you use "it" to refer to countrys.
Thats is all, i think. Good bye for now :) .
.- Some are very quite (WW) and others are more popular and luxury I think that the word is Quiet but Catalina wrote it bad
.-"full of important place(SM) to human history". She forgot the S on Places. of that, is a very nice text, with a strong desire that i support.
.-"Also, you can do a(NN) nature tours around the Greek Islands"
.-"also is a good place to relax and enjoy of the sea, architecture, nature and her(WW) colours." You use "it" to refer to a nature charasteristic.
.-" Her(WW) geography is mountainous" Again, you use "it" to refer to countrys.
Thats is all, i think. Good bye for now :) .
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